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Alone in the Dark
Contributed by
WickdlyInocnt
on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 01:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Alone in the dark
allows fear to creep in,
thoughts overwhelming
the senses within.
Dark and disturbing
the images flow free,
vial and disgusting
they’re devouring me...
Evil lives here
deep in the dark,
it’s stalking the lonely
seeking out its next mark.
And try as you might,
yet to no avail,
there’s no place to hide,
it’s got you; you’ve failed...
Copyright ©
WickdlyInocnt
... [
2003-04-29 01:25:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Alone in the Dark
(User Rating: 1 ) by ilovejhawkins on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 01:38:14 AM AEST (User
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i like it. very well written!!!! |
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Re: Alone in the Dark
(User Rating: 1 ) by vydana on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 02:33:22 AM AEST (User
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very nice poem :) |
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Re: Alone in the Dark
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 02:02:34 PM AEST (User
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oooh i love it! an excellent dark write:)
hugs nessa |
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Re: Alone in the Dark
(User Rating: 1 ) by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 04:22:58 PM AEST (User
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wow, how powerful is this?! I love the picture it creates, but my favourite stanza definitely has to be the first one.
excellent write.
x_x_x
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