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The Lighthouse
Contributed by
ravi
on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 12:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The angry sea struck cruel and boldened,
The lighthouse sighed;old and abandoned.
The golden days of youth;a kingdom's pride,
It switched from side to side.
The light lighting for miles,
The sea always in smiles.
The bells chiming in harmony,
The jagged rocks writhing in agony
The sea lost its lip and whip
The lighthouse blessed upon by many a ship.
The past has gone in tatter,
The present bent upon to shatter.
Changes brought in;at every junction
The lighthouse had ceased to function.
But still it hands;braving the world
With a grim bruised frolic
As a forgotton lonely ancient relic
Copyright ©
ravi
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2003-04-29 00:25:00]
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Re: The Lighthouse
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 07:23:40 AM AEST
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What a beautiful (yet so sad) picture you have painted here, Ravi.
Thanks for this...waking up to a poem about light in the ocean.....
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Re: The Lighthouse
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 10:13:34 AM AEST
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excellent write..very good imagery
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Re: The Lighthouse
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 10:53:45 AM AEST
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Ravi this is another beautiful poem. I love the sea and the mighty light house. Brilliant write!! Thanks for starting my day with this wonderful poem!!
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Re: The Lighthouse
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by RockRoss on
Saturday, 12th November 2011 @ 08:59:10 AM AEST
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Very good writing...
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