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Judas hug
Contributed by
ming
on
Friday, 15th July 2011 @ 12:13:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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pull
off your mask
pull off
face the black
night takes flight
fright swallows
hole
rumbles
thunder
flattened out
as well as
The Aftermath
you and I
the
unholy
alliance
not you
not
no.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2011-07-15 12:13:14]
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Re: Judas hug
(User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on
Friday, 15th July 2011 @ 01:45:00 PM AEST
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What gets me about your work
is it never gets same, or boring
I always get these dead zone like glimpses from your mind
in this one the creature unveiled is like many of our experiences
where something is not at all what it seemed
leaving us to choose, who we really are in discovering so
depth inspired, from an old hand, well scripted
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Re: Judas hug
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by iodinelove on
Friday, 15th July 2011 @ 10:50:49 PM AEST
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I try not to post comments on your poems too often because I don't want you to think I'm only doing it because you post on my mine. I do want you to know, however, that I enjoy your poetry greatly and yours is the first that I click on when i see it.
I also enjoy reading your comments on my own poetry, and am grateful for them even when the piece is unworthy.
Always, abraham |
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