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you too
Contributed by
razorbladerose
on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 11:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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There I was once again
Standing way at the top
Looking down below
Only because I let you get to me
Feeling the long cool breeze
From a rain that had since fallen
The trees shook violently
Each time I would try to make a step
The light of the full moon
Didn't glow as orange, not even yellow
But more like an awful vomit color
I think you took over the land that evening
My head started to spin
My heart beating through my chest
Thinking about all the things I could do to you
It felt like such an evil rush
As the long cool breeze
Turned to thin silence
I heard footsteps creeping up behind me
I turned my head, and there you were
My eyes rolled up behind my head
I've been so sick and tired of your ugly face
So I did nothing
Because you are a waste of my time
It was then
You ran to me
And without speaking a word
You pushed me off the cliff!
But, you know...
To this day, I still do wonder...
How did you know I could fly?
***** you too!
Copyright © Jeannie T. 2003
Copyright ©
razorbladerose
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2003-04-28 23:25:00]
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Re: you too
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by Metalmouth666 on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 09:40:56 PM AEST
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| Very Good it shows an inside anger towards this person yet you have a joking matter to the poem and I like that Great Write. |
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Re: you too
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by sideshowrunaway on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 01:18:40 AM AEST
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| Lol that was great. The last part really cracks me up. Just another reminder of how much I really hate people. |
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