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God`s mistake
Contributed by
girish
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Monday, 11th July 2011 @ 07:05:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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What you have given me has not been given to the other
This is the reason for which one has to suffer
And this really makes the humble person become terror
When not in terror the person comes to offer the prayer
Ram, Allah, Jesus and more names are given to you
If your names are not different confusion will be few
When you don`t stand united people will have no clue
Remain united and make the earth from red to blue
You have not granted everyone what they really need
For any sorrow and anger you have sowed the seed
The cause for a problem is nothing but your deed
Change yourself and be a model to all when you lead
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girish
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2011-07-11 19:05:56]
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Re: God`s mistake
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 12th July 2011 @ 01:39:24 AM AEST
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I wouldn't really say that's gods mistake. More of humanities mistake, but either way, it does cause a lot of suffering.
Honestly there are a lot of mistakes that were made when we were created though. (if we were created) |
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Re: God`s mistake
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by UNORTHODOX on
Tuesday, 12th July 2011 @ 09:33:22 AM AEST
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It's the human condition to blame others for our short comings,
while that statement's not directed towards any indivdual,
it certainly is prevalent amongst man.
To the writer, I can sense your frustrations towards the world
but put into perspective we are to blame,
for the path we've taken
for it's wall written, life is a gift.
However your point was conveyed well
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: God`s mistake
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by Bevan on
Tuesday, 12th July 2011 @ 12:49:36 PM AEST
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| Moving and thought provoking. Well done! |
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