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Solitude, Revised
Contributed by
Obnoxious_Bread
on
Sunday, 10th July 2011 @ 11:34:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I see light
where other see darkness,
in the drinking the sweet water of a dead sea
without end in sight
I feast in their silence,
in their distance,
I like to drown in dead air,
with no one there to revive me
But they cannot understand
that in my silent, watery grave
I am, what alive I cannot be
And yet even now I wish
that I could be dead together,
in company of someone
who could find too, joy in drowning,
and speak to me in the language of silence
of their silence,
of their vast, endless sea of solitude
who else, could see light in darkness,
but me
alone
drowning...
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Re: Solitude, Revised
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by RachelSixx on
Monday, 11th July 2011 @ 08:35:07 PM AEST
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| very dark and beautiful, i love it. |
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Re: Solitude, Revised
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 12th July 2011 @ 01:41:03 AM AEST
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| It sounds like you enjoy sadness. There is a beauty in pain and tragedy. |
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