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a wounded poet
Contributed by
razorbladerose
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Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
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I remember the sun on the grass
Sitting under that weeping willow tree
Here lied the blood of a wounded poet
The dreams of the damned
Float around on the Dead Sea
I can see darkness grasping for light
As the light of the moon bleeds
I can see views beyond four walls
I now know all that I could not see
It was then, I saw you
Floating around on the Dead Sea
I could not save you, for I did not care to
I could see darkness grasping
For that crown of gold I once gave to you
Suddenly, all I saw was a crown of old
I remember the moonlight on my skin
Sitting under that weeping willow tree
Here revived the soul of a once wounded poet
Copyright © Jeannie T. 2003
Copyright ©
razorbladerose
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2003-04-28 22:45:00]
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Re: a wounded poet
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by exiled on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 10:57:18 PM AEST
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Very good write, I really enjoyed. This cuts deep and leaves an unhealing scar because it is all so true.
exiled
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Re: a wounded poet
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 11:19:49 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc, Jeannie... great imagery here!
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Re: a wounded poet
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 12:26:24 AM AEST
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This is a powerful poem. My only opinion keep on writing them, your great. I'll keep reading them!!
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Re: a wounded poet
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 05:43:15 PM AEST
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| written only from a true poetic heart:) |
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