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Take my Hand
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
on
Friday, 8th July 2011 @ 02:47:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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It may seem that i have dropped you cold
But I'm merely just putting you on hold
And I know you're the kind to wait forever
Although you'd rather the situation be now or never
Oh you know that I could never say never
One day you'll get your wish beyond your wildest dreams
Some day I will reach out and give back for all you've done for me
I'll let you take my hand, hold it close and never have to worry
About all of the world's cares and complaints
Take my hand, take my love and all that i am
To be the one that will show you care and compassion
Why does society have a bad habit
Of critiquing those who do not conform
Well honey, darling, I may seem to be
Conforming myself but I'm only trying to make peace
Please, don't give up, goodbye does not mean forever
Someday I'll let you take my hand, hold it close and never have to worry
About all of the world's cares and complaints
Take my hand, take my love and all that i am
To be the one that will show you care and compassion
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Re: Take my Hand
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 9th July 2011 @ 07:44:42 AM AEST
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| Lovely writing. The rhyme and soft flow just draws the reader in, a very fine piece. Thanks for posting. |
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Re: Take my Hand
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by emystar on
Saturday, 9th July 2011 @ 12:23:48 PM AEST
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