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Anonymous
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
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Friday, 8th July 2011 @ 05:58:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Marvelous mysteries of love tug at her heart
As she conjures and plots how she'll start
To pry her precious' affections from his soul
Is desperately the one desire; her main goal
Passers-by are merely passers-by and this she will see
For it is her lover-to-be that only fills her with glee
He too cannot wait to caress the fairest of all creatures
Little does she realize the values of her own features
The young lady find a note in her hand as she walks in a crowd
She sees hears words of love although the halls are loud
This tid-bit was as potent as an embrace or kiss
And she treasures such acts of remaining anonymous
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Deidra_Carmichael
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2011-07-08 05:58:30]
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Re: Anonymous
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 8th July 2011 @ 12:27:09 PM AEST
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Right on, chickadee...
This speaks to me of a rich inner~world & I can relate from the wealth of my own...
Loved the scenario & really dug the flow of word play in this lil' gem...
"He too cannot wait to caress the fairest of all creatures
Little does she realize the values of her own features"~you
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Re: Anonymous
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2011 @ 01:17:07 PM AEST
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| This is a very enjoyable write to read. Well done |
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