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Leave revenge to fate
Contributed by
ofmurder
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Friday, 8th July 2011 @ 12:18:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Revenge is best left to fate.
It's a sweet summer's curse..
so prepare to feel the pain I felt you ***** backstabber.
And you know my mind won't be at ease
until I see blood at your knees,
you stupid ***** you're out of luck,
GOOD DAY.
WE MUST REJOICE
for today, is a new day, a new fate, a new path.
an occurrence i have waited for ever so patiently is happening as we speak.
soon SOON they shall pay
with death? nay say i. but with betrayal. betrayal in front of one's own eyes. hah.
Copyright ©
ofmurder
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2011-07-08 00:18:28]
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Re: Leave revenge to fate
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by CommasCanSeperate on
Friday, 8th July 2011 @ 12:46:20 PM AEST
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| Wow really stronger words here, you can feel the power and threat throughout this whole poem. BRILLIANT! |
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Re: Leave revenge to fate
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by UNORTHODOX on
Friday, 8th July 2011 @ 11:30:23 PM AEST
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This is a naturally a good piece.
"The elders loathe a modesty which is not"
Well written
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