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Through My Eyes
Contributed by
spiritbody
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Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 05:01:06 PM in AEST
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Not through my eyes
Can you see the world
Each passing moment is my creation
And sometimes with joy
Sometimes trepidation
Do I see my way
Sometimes I am sinkable
And sometimes I rise
To the surface where the view is wide
But where each passing tide
Sweeps me to unknown shores
And at the end of the ride
I learn to walk again
But sometimes I see you
Riding a wave of your own
And travel together
Instead of alone
Until one of us goes under
Like a sinking stone
Trying to find a home
On the quiet river beds
You wont rest there long
Life goes on
But I hope you can take
Some of the quietness with you
When the riverbeds are gone
Not through your eyes
Can I see the world
Each passing moment is your creation
And sometimes with joy
Sometimes trepidation
You will see your way
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Re: Through My Eyes
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 05:10:00 PM AEST
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This write is one of truth and relates to us all. Thank you very much for posting this and many blessings,
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Re: Through My Eyes
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 08:17:11 PM AEST
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Very wise words.
Remarkable work of art.
blessings |
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Re: Through My Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2011 @ 01:19:03 PM AEST
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| Very well written |
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Re: Through My Eyes
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by autumnrain on
Saturday, 9th July 2011 @ 04:35:54 PM AEST
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| I like how you ended it with your beginning words. Good job |
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Re: Through My Eyes
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by shelby on
Sunday, 10th July 2011 @ 09:12:42 AM AEST
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Wise and powerful words. Neatly placed in lines that flow. Beautiful work.
Michelle |
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