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Echoes
Contributed by
huwbeauty
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Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 02:23:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I can only be me,
and try my best,
Try to embrace this world,
front each stern test,
But 'cause your face,
still haunts my dreams,
With grace,all I perceive,
echoes with coarse thoughts,
hopeless remorse,
And grief.
Copyright ©
huwbeauty
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2011-07-07 14:23:40]
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Re: Echoes
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by spiritbody on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 05:03:01 PM AEST
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| Wow. Just a few short lines and you cut right to it. Thats good poetry |
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Re: Echoes
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 08:21:34 PM AEST
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Very good writing.
blessings |
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Re: Echoes
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2011 @ 01:44:06 PM AEST
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| Very Good |
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Re: Echoes
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 9th July 2011 @ 12:53:44 AM AEST
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Hi Mat
these few lines are bursting with so much inner thought, a really fine piece of writing. Love it.
Dennis. |
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