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Contributed by
ming
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Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 01:19:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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standing still
almost
loose from the world
solitude suites
dry
as a bird claw
on pavement
picking obscure
thoughts
from corners
as if
no not
a broken
place
a fullness
of self.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2011-07-07 13:19:37]
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Re: find
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by UNORTHODOX on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 01:58:27 PM AEST
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I read this one at least 10 times
It's like looking at the picture where everyone says there's a hidden image
but from this write I saw many different images and they were all brilliant
"Picking obscure thoughts"that line hung me up for a while
clever piece, deeper than meets the eye
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Re: find
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 08:25:07 PM AEST
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I agree, this is an awesome writing.
blessings
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Re: find
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by Spike on
Monday, 11th July 2011 @ 12:02:35 AM AEST
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My kind of place, the exteriors and interiors. Well scribed, sparse and brightly lit.
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