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shade of midnight
Contributed by
ming
on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 12:00:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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and a poison flower
in my mouth (or a pen)
spider den
inner zen
chi-chi
with a bleeding edge
and infinite halves
conversationaly
murmur scratchs
side-eyed know
and until you give
silver or not
allowed
appease the ancestors
oh my pocket!
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2011-07-07 12:00:04]
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Re: shade of midnight
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by UNORTHODOX on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 01:33:55 PM AEST
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This write triggers the different sectors of the mind all at once
something subliminal but right in your face
I admire the sheer confidence to confront the status quo
while enlightening with some truths, that are just facts of life
your work dances on the subconscience like no other
truly an elite piece
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: shade of midnight
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by UNORTHODOX on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 01:33:55 PM AEST
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This write triggers the different sectors of the mind all at once
something subliminal but right in your face
I admire the sheer confidence to confront the status quo
while enlightening with some truths, that are just facts of life
your work dances on the subconscience like no other
truly an elite piece
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: shade of midnight
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by UNORTHODOX on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 01:33:55 PM AEST
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This write triggers the different sectors of the mind all at once
something subliminal but right in your face
I admire the sheer confidence to confront the status quo
while enlightening with some truths, that are just facts of life
your work dances on the subconscience like no other
truly an elite piece
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: shade of midnight
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by UNORTHODOX on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 01:33:55 PM AEST
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This write triggers the different sectors of the mind all at once
something subliminal but right in your face
I admire the sheer confidence to confront the status quo
while enlightening with some truths, that are just facts of life
your work dances on the subconscience like no other
truly an elite piece
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: shade of midnight
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by UNORTHODOX on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 01:33:55 PM AEST
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This write triggers the different sectors of the mind all at once
something subliminal but right in your face
I admire the sheer confidence to confront the status quo
while enlightening with some truths, that are just facts of life
your work dances on the subconscience like no other
truly an elite piece
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: shade of midnight
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by UNORTHODOX on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 01:33:55 PM AEST
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This write triggers the different sectors of the mind all at once
something subliminal but right in your face
I admire the sheer confidence to confront the status quo
while enlightening with some truths, that are just facts of life
your work dances on the subconscience like no other
truly an elite piece
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: shade of midnight
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 05:33:20 PM AEST
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Once again a fabulous write. I must say this definitely touched me and triggered many emotions. I admire your skill of appeal g to ones senses;you really could win a Pulitzer Prize,
Deidra
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Re: shade of midnight
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 08:42:03 PM AEST
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Great work of art.
blessings |
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