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look for me
Contributed by
ming
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Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 08:35:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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behind code
without a compass
frozen and rocking
soaring and forgotten
with the door locked
storms blow in
slipped skin hanging
behind cobwebs
see the second self
a 'non' caught
from the corner eye
chasm deep inside
the way I go
was not
for you.
Copyright ©
ming
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2011-07-07 08:35:21]
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Re: look for me
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by UNORTHODOX on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 10:45:20 AM AEST
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There is an eeriness about this piece
which demands to be noted
a depth which supercedes any stint of ignorance
the mysic is overwhelming and
I just really feel the power of this passage
it' good, it's bad ,it's ugly, it's real
honestly an honor to read
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: look for me
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 06:59:21 PM AEST
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I must say the combination of darkness and loneliness is effective to show that one cannot always go ones own way peacefully. Thank you for sharing,
Deidra |
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Re: look for me
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by elle on
Tuesday, 12th July 2011 @ 07:40:10 AM AEST
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Dearest ming, greetings & salutations :)
How I do marvel at your truly insightful & always briliant endeavors into such vast chambers as the human condition & any referencing, thereof. Your words capture & lay bare. As a result, any who take them in, deliberate & can attest, are soul-ly endowed & transformed in indistinguishable yet undeniable measure.
Even now, our base interactions & the ability to carry on the crudest of behaviors on a societal level, have & do continually leave me questioning this proving ground that we accept as life. Both in our modern-day culture & in individual inter-action, somehow, as a whole, we have, sorely, missed the mark.
As for those of us (myself, included) who have never attained one iota of normalcy. . . those who have been an everlasting bane to the insidious, cultural encroachment so carefully laid out by our forefathers. . . the ones being manipulated into an unrecognizable slant until the point of singularity. . . we, who exist in an underlying current of subterfuge, the results of which directly or indirectly cause us to appear askew & mal-adjusted. . . all the vibration of souls not lost to this illusion, (atleast). . .
I say endless power to soaring & forgotten. . . steadfast strength to traverse a path much less taken. . . truth that lies beyond the beauty in being truly & undeniably authentic. . . progressive peace behind the lambent. . . & eternal grace under sullen trepidation & the extreme pressures of the fold.
You. . . oh sower of seeds. . . BRAVO!
I slip. . . you slip. . . we slip. . .
Yours truly
elle :) |
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