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raven-bird
Contributed by
gypsymaddness
on
Wednesday, 6th July 2011 @ 07:29:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Raven-bird,one who is crushedyou look like the world's weight is on your shoulders,you still believe in love,just not for you.Raven-bird, so beautiful in your stillness, so peaceful in your stillness.Raven-bird, your wings are clipped,but still yearning to jump off that cliff.Raven-bird,with tears trickling slowly down your face,holding yourself motionless,yet still filled with a strange grace.Raven-bird, the sun glints off the blue in your hair,encircling your body with a magestic flair.Raven-bird...your flying.Raven-bird...your wings...no longer are you cold.Raven-bird, i see you falling,I behold, raven-bird,...I feel you soar.
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Re: raven-bird
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by MisfitMe on
Wednesday, 6th July 2011 @ 07:41:42 PM AEST
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Right on, chickadee!!!
"Black bird singin' in the dead of night~
Take these broken wings & learn to fly..."
To evoke Beatles lyrics through your own words is a feat that speaks for itself!
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Re: raven-bird
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 08:47:25 PM AEST
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Beautiful work.
blessings |
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Re: raven-bird
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Wednesday, 9th November 2011 @ 02:15:43 PM AEST
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Ah, but Love is indeed real!
And yes, it's also FOR You!
Because LOVE itself is a choice.
If you choose it, though it may
be painful at first, you shall have
it. I already love you through
your talented expressions!
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns (Rob) |
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Re: raven-bird
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 09:52:52 AM AEST
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beautiful! i feel like he died in this but his spirit soared
at the end,truly written beautiful and so gentle and
peaceful,
hugs n' love nessa
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