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~Home Coming~
Contributed by
MisfitMe
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Wednesday, 6th July 2011 @ 06:16:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Through the misty veil of tears~
separating your world from mine
My reflection disappears~
as I retrace the crossed line...
Backing away I stumble~
regaining my feet I run
As the world behind me crumbles~
with so much left undone...
The wherefore & why I sought~
still a pipe dream unknown
So uselessly for fought~
& on the wind away blown...
Left in a world turned nightmare~
to question where I belong
With no understanding shared~
for what had become my song...
Too much did I reveal~
on this fools errand for gold
Through alchemy made deals~
for what could not be sold...
But learn I did as I cried~
for what could never be
Letting the wish within me die~
so that from it I'd be free...
Copyright ©
MisfitMe
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2011-07-06 18:16:16]
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Re: ~Home Coming~
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 06:22:03 PM AEST
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A very awesome, creative, powerful write.
luv it.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: ~Home Coming~
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2014 @ 10:43:38 AM AEST
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A very powerful piece of poetry you have written here... What a delight to read such a treasure! Everything fits: the structure, the rhymes convey the mood,and you set the tone wonderfully. Then there is that ending- perfection. I know I have read something special when I find myself holding my breath at the end. Exceptional!
~Scorp |
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Re: ~Home Coming~
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th May 2014 @ 03:58:03 PM AEST
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| truly beautiful! hugs n' love nessa |
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