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My Dirty Old White Walls
Contributed by
dirkj
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Wednesday, 6th July 2011 @ 02:11:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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Where color use
To play now only darkness
Hangs and Somber stays
Everything still looks the same
But everything changed
Laughter changed places
New faces replaced old faces
How i long
Still to see
Some of the people
That looked so well after me
Faces i have embraced
Walks like lonely ghosts
Up and down my corridors
I can hear them whisper at night
Or maybe,,,, I just want to hear them
That's the way I escape
Eyes of long ago
Hangs like portraits
On my not so shiny old walls
They wink at me
When I hold them together
But,,,they are eyes
That belong to my past
People I knew
Such a long long time ago
I can only live
On their memories
I'm just an old house
But boy if I could talk
What a bestseller
My thoughts would produce
Copyright ©
dirkj
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2011-07-06 02:11:12]
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Re: My Dirty Old White Walls
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by UNORTHODOX on
Wednesday, 6th July 2011 @ 11:36:12 AM AEST
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I can whole heartedly say this poem is beautiful
in that it conjured some irreplaceable memories
the kind that make your heart sing, of youth, of innocence,
of a time where nothing could bring you down
the artistic components are immaculate as well
fantastic read
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Re: My Dirty Old White Walls
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by CommasCanSeperate on
Wednesday, 6th July 2011 @ 11:54:36 AM AEST
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| Great read. Really plays on peoples memories, beautiful x |
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Re: My Dirty Old White Walls
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 6th July 2011 @ 03:44:50 PM AEST
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Awesome write.
you're very creative.
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