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Daddy's Lil Girl
Contributed by
trisha
on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 08:48:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
FathersDayPoems
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When I look at you
I can see myself in
The minor.
Just yesterday
I was daddy's lil girl
All grown up..
We had are ups
We had are downs
We alwayed seems
To get though things.
Daddy's lil girl
Had shoulder to cry on.
Just yesterday
Daddy's lil girl was just
In his arms.
Tomorrow daddy's lil girl
Isn't in daddy's eyes
He's losing her by the minute
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trisha
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2003-04-28 20:48:44]
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Re: Daddy's Lil Girl
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 10:27:26 PM AEST
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Awww, Trish... we tend to lose this when we grow up huh?...being Daddy's litle girl...
Nice write, tho..
Jenni |
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Re: Daddy's Lil Girl
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by Apartment213 on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 02:17:28 AM AEST
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| very very emotional good poem |
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Re: Daddy's Lil Girl
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by AngryPrincess on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 10:01:48 PM AEST
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| best one yet! good job |
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Re: Daddy's Lil Girl
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 03:11:59 AM AEST
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| My grandaughters are growing up fast, your poem is helping me adjust. Thanks |
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