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sweet pea
Contributed by
poeticjestix
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Monday, 4th July 2011 @ 11:45:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sweet pea
you cling to me
so lovely, and fragrant
your spiny form
will onward roam
til I lose my patience
as winter looms
your beauty, doomed
regresses 'til done time
dithering
and withering
then missed like the sunshine.
A hedgerow
I steady grow
in all kinds of weather
I bear the days
of cold and grey
til we're back together.
I bless the space
your colours grace
as springtime comes early
I lack the spell
your lustre swells
my heart is yours fairly
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poeticjestix
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2011-07-04 11:45:45]
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Re: sweet pea
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by MisfitMe on
Monday, 4th July 2011 @ 03:08:57 PM AEST
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| Right on, sweet read... |
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Re: sweet pea
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Monday, 4th July 2011 @ 05:47:47 PM AEST
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I admire your Use of an extended metaphor which is very effective. Take care and remember jesus love you,
Deidra |
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Re: sweet pea
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th July 2011 @ 07:57:37 AM AEST
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| Flows lovely, nice stuff |
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