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When I was a young man (updated)

Contributed by erniej on Sunday, 3rd July 2011 @ 10:24:26 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

When I was a young man I was blessed to receive
Three gifts of wonder the angles beget me
Three baby daughters I could hold in my hand
And I thanked God up above for revealing his plan

Bygone memories crept in, albeit at first
Of the ones, tally them two, and at their worst
I, just one, defensive and small
No resistance had I, to rise above all

Hideous memories, a legacy long past.
I solemnly declared it’s time put to end
Send to hells bowels, and eternity last.

I did my best and though all was well
As such, some comportment
By way of all strengths can’t be fought.
Carved in minds stonework one can get caught

As time went along, I thought I did well
At least I never put my children through hell
And then my marriage, of such a long time
The foundation crumbled and was no longer mien

A pain any stronger couldn’t be felt
Till to my attention as was brought
My children’s repute, revealed not the father I thought
Where do I go, how will I do
Delusions of their love Shattered in to.

Day brake finds me trembling, at night I’m lost
I weep every day for the love I have lost
To abandon me, if that’s what they choose
I’m just that child, alone and abused.

Copyright Â© erniej ... [ 2011-07-03 10:24:26]
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