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Lost
Contributed by
parrot_cliche
on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tension.
Rising with every step I ever took,
Every thought I ever thought,
Every sound I ever heard.
Lonely.
As I walked the streets,
As I sat on a swing,
As I fell asleep.
Cowardly.
I ignored the rumours which surrounded me.
I avoided the people which caused me pain.
I stopped living.
Scared
I felt,
I was,
I knew.
Scarred.
Isolated,
Unidentified.
Lost.
Copyright ©
parrot_cliche
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2003-04-28 20:05:00]
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Re: Lost
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by Jaima on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 06:09:43 AM AEST
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| good poem..holds deep meaning..*smiles* |
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Re: Lost
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by Wilder on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 02:31:09 PM AEST
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good write. keep it up :o)
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Re: Lost
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 04:59:20 PM AEST
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v. impressive write. love the short lines - it gives it so much more, if you know what i mean.
hugs x_x_x |
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