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Truth About Life
Contributed by
punkrocknemo
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Thursday, 30th June 2011 @ 09:59:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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Its amazing how were blinded by what we feel
How we think something could last but it was never truelly real.
How we can put on a fake smile and hide for awhile.
How fast we can lose our pride or how many times that we have cried.
How many times people could have lied when they didnt even try.
The amount of people that have gotten abused
and all of those people that are confused.
All of those people in despair and all the people who dont care.
Maybe someday we can all help each other
because everyone has something to which they need to recover.
By: Jessica R. Coy
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2011-06-30 09:59:09]
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Re: Truth About Life
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 30th June 2011 @ 11:23:37 AM AEST
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| Great piece of raw reality,and a reflection on how we are in life, love the first two lines and the second I recognised the most,not only summarised as secrets I think but as whats just beneath surface,clever reflective write. |
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Re: Truth About Life
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by NightMareShoGun on
Monday, 15th October 2012 @ 01:39:14 AM AEST
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| but your poem about life is greater |
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