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150 Bottles Of Wine
Contributed by
dirkj
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Wednesday, 29th June 2011 @ 02:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Every bottle of wine
Changes color
As every tear I cry
Drips in it
Deeper and deeper
Every bottle of wine
Tells a story
Sunday nights
Drinking sessions
Alone with pictures
Of you in my mind
Every bottle of wine
Your seduction visible
If you look past the label
You can see my
Crying face
Clearly ….living inside the bottle
Every bottle of Wine
Filled with my fears
After you have left
Tears running down my cheeks
Washed away by Red Red wine
Everytime,,,I feel so weak
My dear
I have 150 empty bottles of wine
Spelling out your name
In my backyard
150 bottles of wine
Ready to tumble
Down and down
Bleeding hands
Pick up the pieces
I need 150 more
Copyright ©
dirkj
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2011-06-29 02:25:00]
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Re: 150 Bottles Of Wine
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 1st July 2011 @ 06:36:17 AM AEST
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Firstly, if you had drunk 150 bottles of wine I'm sure you wouldn't have been able to come up with this.
Secondly, its a nice emotional write, which should inspire us all to write more.
I already have my pen in my hand, balanced between the fingers of course as i'm still typing !!
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Re: 150 Bottles Of Wine
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by ming on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 08:14:14 AM AEST
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I agree a GREAT emotional write. Anytime my mind's eye can 'see' a picture of the words, I am entranced. And I saw you with bleeding hands spelling her name w/broken glass crawling across the yard! Great write!
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