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The hunter updated
Contributed by
erniej
on
Monday, 27th June 2011 @ 05:32:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The night imparts darkness
This hunter steals in silent trek.
And a new day will commence.
With my advancement such as
To not cause detect.
Air claims the night, icy and calm.
Silence of movement.
To not cause alarm.
As night sets out to depart.
Amid the first rays of daylight.
Now the hunting will start.
When the light of the sun.
Let’s itself show.
Dew drops dangling.
With different colors will glow.
I choose a place.
One the lesser I’ll show.
As I move an arrow.
From quiver to bow.
I see the signs of those left before.
From a deer in the rut, of this I am sure.
And I’ll hope he’ll pass by.
This way closely once more.
Who’ll be first?
To make a mistake.
Ah, it was he, I heard a twig break.
My heart starts pounding.
So as to burst out.
As I sit unmoving.
From his hiding he came out.
I draw back my bow.
As I hold a deep breath.
My arrow flies true.
And brings swiftly his death.
Copyright ©
erniej
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2011-06-27 05:32:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The hunter updated
(User Rating: 1 ) by TheOwl on
Monday, 28th November 2011 @ 10:30:03 PM AEST (User
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That was Awesome, I felt like I was there with you. : ) |
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