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Sunset
Contributed by
spike
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Sunday, 26th June 2011 @ 08:43:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The cold shoulder,
the blank stare
those pursed lips
and chilly glare;
the turned back
as you lean away
I guess there is no warmth today
that sharp tongue,
the crossed arms
unresponsive to my charms;
the harsh tone
and downward pout
I think that I've been frozen out
such callous words,
impatient moans!
scoffs and long-suffering groans
we had our moments in the sun;
I loved her then,
but now it's done.
Copyright ©
spike
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2011-06-26 20:43:18]
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Re: Sunset
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by emystar on
Sunday, 26th June 2011 @ 09:25:07 PM AEST
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Well it sure is good to know u r still hanging with us.
Really good writing, friend.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Sunset
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by spud on
Monday, 27th June 2011 @ 01:36:11 AM AEST
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Hi Spike,
Boy, have we all been all there!
Perfectly scribed, my friend - spot on!
Tommy
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Re: Sunset
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 28th June 2011 @ 10:13:04 AM AEST
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This is powerful I felt it. Love the pic too fitting for the right.
Hugs you
Michelle |
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Re: Sunset
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by NightOwl61 on
Tuesday, 28th June 2011 @ 11:58:03 PM AEST
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| That's one of the drawbacks of a relationship. Gotta take the good with the bad. A strong write. tfs |
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Re: Sunset
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th December 2011 @ 11:56:24 AM AEST
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| Beautiful sunset for such a seemingly sad situation. There's a song about partin' called, Thank God 'n' Greyhound You're Gone. Maybe that's the kind of beautiful sunset ya painted. Regardless, beautifully written with yer Aussie wordsmithin' charms. Kudos |
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