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I DREAMED
Contributed by
emystar
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Saturday, 25th June 2011 @ 02:33:57 AM in AEST
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Our children are my joy
At least we did something right.
Our first great grandson so sweet.
Two more on the way thank God
every night.
I dreamed you died and
it broke my heart.
Even tho we're only friends
We've known each other
a life times, it seems.
Still life goes on and things end.
Our blood lines run very deep.
Our children, grand children,
and great ones too.
Our history flows thru eternity.
In case I've never said it, "thank you".
We've made many mistakes
But our children was never one.
Friend, be proud of this,
luv is what matters in the end.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2011-06-25 02:33:57]
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Re: I DREAMED
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 1st July 2011 @ 05:39:03 AM AEST
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Your pride and your joy is there for all to see in this write.
You have captured it so well.
Nice work.
Steve |
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Re: I DREAMED
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by Lionel on
Monday, 4th July 2011 @ 11:11:26 PM AEST
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| Hello Emystar, friend. You are so right with this poem. |
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Re: I DREAMED
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by ShambalaMoon on
Friday, 15th July 2011 @ 10:55:11 AM AEST
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Right on, lady! The Emystar runs deep through generations to come...
Bodes well for a world in need of such grace!
OneLove |
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Re: I DREAMED
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by FlintHunter on
Friday, 2nd September 2011 @ 10:44:41 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful and inspiring poem. I really enjoyed reading it... what a wonderful dream you must have had. Well it's your positive outlook, which, like the sun, shines through you and your golden poem. [And also thanks for your sweet words to me about FIREMAN]. WHAT A WONDERFUL COMMUNITY I JOINED!
-FLINT |
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Re: I DREAMED
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by rick2 on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2011 @ 06:32:56 PM AEST
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| I love all your stuff but this one is especially nice. thanks and keep writing! |
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