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Shepherd Society
Contributed by
unorthodox
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Thursday, 23rd June 2011 @ 11:17:27 AM in AEST
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An angel's instrument in the hands of man, symbolic eternity, built on sand, sky's which gray when magic's black, in a society where summer snows A speech which leaves the memory shot, modified methods camping minds, the tide of change a labyrinth, in a society where winter burns
Fallen stars may beauty touch, on demographics darkness feeds, the butcher waits in shepherd's clothing, in a society where no one knows
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Re: Shepherd Society
(User Rating: 1 ) by FlintHunter on
Friday, 2nd September 2011 @ 02:37:12 PM AEST (User
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An awesome poem -- perhaps too awesome for persons to comment on -- are they thunderstruck?
You are a writer. A good writer. You may become a GREAT writer -- I know so. But you must break all rules -- even your own -- and let the thing make itself. Instead of writing the poem, let the poem write you.
Yes, you already do that. But. But. But.
There
Is
More
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You.
--Flint |
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