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all because of you
Contributed by
LadyDama
on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
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i looked into your eyes
so filled with sorrow
confusion lives here
which path do you follow?
depression is comfortable
manic a "safe haven"
but what of your spirit
has it flown like the raven?
look deeper, my friend
peer into your soul
this life you have bought
has taken it's toll
plunge into your madness
recover you being
if you look very hard
you'll see what i'm seeing
a precious, beautiful person
full of love and light
an amazing young creature
a wondrous sight
you are so special
so unique and robust
coddle your feelings
in this you can trust
there's a light, i see
at the end of the tunnel
embrace it, my friend
open your heart like a funnel
i believe in you
with my heart, through and through
this world's a better place
all because of you...
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LadyDama
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Re: all because of you
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by springchic1979 on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 04:07:41 PM AEST
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Very sweet LadyDama. Beautiful words from a caring friend.
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Re: all because of you
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by lilch4ever on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 04:22:54 PM AEST
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| awww very sweet and inspirational. Wonderfully written. |
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Re: all because of you
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 04:59:31 PM AEST
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wonderful write
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Re: all because of you
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 08:16:22 PM AEST
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this is an amazing write! you really got down and in there with this poem! i love it:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: all because of you
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by shelby on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 11:48:08 PM AEST
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This is wonderful
Michelle |
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