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Needful Thing
Contributed by
Jussy74
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Saturday, 18th June 2011 @ 01:47:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I want to tear my hair out, rip the skin from my bone
The ache in my chest has returned
A symptom of being alone
Desolation after your touch has burned
Scorched into my soul
Seeped through my very pores
Leaving me no longer feeling hole
My anguished heart is battered and sore
Screaming out the pain
The frustration of no power
Seeing everything I wish to gain
Like a mouthful of sugar tasting sour
First the sweetness and then the slap
Everything I want wrapped up in you
At my finger tips and then drawn back
Leaving me clueless as to what exactly to do
Like a sickness of the mind
My heart switches to override
It suddenly becomes blind
As it seeks to conquer and devide
Splitting my sense and my feelings
Causing this internal fight
Leaving me hopeless and reeling
As all reason and rational thought take flight.
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Jussy74
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2011-06-18 13:47:04]
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Re: Needful Thing
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by poeticjestix on
Saturday, 18th June 2011 @ 04:36:47 PM AEST
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well described. The depressing thought is that there are millions and millions of people on the earth and yet everyone on here seems to pick a bad egg!Are we all bad? or, do we expect too much of each other? I blame one person for breaking my heart and then years later treat someone else badly. I think we all kid ourselves. Let's all be selfish and not try to make things perfect whilst not expecting perfection in return, then we'll all be fine.
ahhh. Vodka makes things so clear |
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Re: Needful Thing
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by xnickix7 on
Friday, 24th June 2011 @ 09:01:31 PM AEST
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| I sense a loss of control. Great writing! |
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