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An ocean in a sea
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Wednesday, 15th June 2011 @ 01:02:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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The door opens.
She stands closed,
A grim inspection.
The way she smiles,
Her ugliness so close
Soothes the hidden scar.
The stars have broken me
The light so deep above
An ocean in a sea—
The world goes by,
The door closes.
I envy the sound.
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iodinelove
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2011-06-15 13:02:50]
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Re: An ocean in a sea
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by ming on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 09:11:07 AM AEST
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Oh oh oh...
'the door close I envy the sound"
love this! I so wish this was a line of mine. :) Thanks for sharing I felt much from this read/write!
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Re: An ocean in a sea
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by FlintHunter on
Saturday, 24th September 2011 @ 09:19:45 AM AEST
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'An ocean in a sea' is a luscious poem -- full of pictures -- enticing -- and easy to read. I especially like the carry-over of the theme of the door -- opening and closing. So much imagery in this free-flowing and continuously-rolling verse. Grand. Special. Captivating.
--FlintHunter
Contributed by iodinelove on Wednesday, June 15 2011 @ 13:02:50 AEST
Topic: Love Remembered
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Re: An ocean in a sea
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th July 2012 @ 11:55:08 PM AEST
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| This is great! So much is said only a few lines! |
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