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Nothing is Left.
Contributed by
potentialpoet96
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Tuesday, 14th June 2011 @ 09:26:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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if there was something i thought i could have done,
i would have done it.
if there was something i thought i could have said,
i would have said it.
if there was anything that could have made things better,
i would have tried it.
if i knew things would get this bad,
i wouldn't have said a word.
there's nothing left for me to do,
our problems are beyond solving.
between something i said, and something you repeated,
everything fell apart.
everything between us that could have been fixed,
was turned to dust; destroyed.
everything between us that could have been said,
went unspoken; silence.
nothing is left to be said,
the only thing is goodbye.
nothing left for mending,
my tears have run dry.
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potentialpoet96
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2011-06-14 21:26:23]
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Re: Nothing is Left.
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by Tomboy on
Wednesday, 15th June 2011 @ 10:26:01 AM AEST
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| Wow, there is such a feeling of finality in the lines of your poem. Excellent read, five stars!! |
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Re: Nothing is Left.
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by Rasberry on
Friday, 17th June 2011 @ 12:05:04 AM AEST
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| When its ovr its ovr and drs nothng dat can b said. . . |
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Re: Nothing is Left.
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by Ambivalence on
Friday, 17th June 2011 @ 01:46:14 PM AEST
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Don't have to think it's all over, because whenever there's an end there's a new beginning...
I enjoyed reading your poem, i can really relate to it.
take care
-K.Z. |
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