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Unconditional love
Contributed by
raymondsincere
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Tuesday, 14th June 2011 @ 07:29:17 PM in AEST
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My love is unconditional and comes without standards. It cradles because its of pure essences. Flowers of the fields pass away
its pedals fall and its beautiful appearance perish away but my love that is unconditional doesn't. Its more faithful today than it was yesterday. This love shows devotion it never under estimate and if bound in any type of chains it helps deliberate. At times I can't
lie I looked at the physical stature through mans eyes but now i see the heart that gives genuine unconditional love like mines.
My unconditional love violates no trust it provides wise counsel and never capitalize on no one else hurt. My love is unconditional
like a mother that has given a child birth, so know that you will always be in my heart, with unconditional love...
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2011-06-14 19:29:17]
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Re: Unconditional love
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by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 15th June 2011 @ 03:40:55 AM AEST
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Interesting poem. Like the message.
Do you speak English as a second language? Just curious based on how you worded some of it. |
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Re: Unconditional love
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by Tomboy on
Wednesday, 15th June 2011 @ 10:28:53 AM AEST
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| Very lovely sentiment, expressed quite well in the lines of your poem. Please watch spelling ("pedals" should be "petals"). Nice read, five stars!! |
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