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Still missing you.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Friday, 10th June 2011 @ 06:56:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Your alive in my mind,
alive, cowed and supine,
Each corner I address,
each feeling I repress,
You compress and defile,
impress with denile,
And 'cause everything I see,
reminds me of thee,
I'm awoken broken,
hoping yet blind,
But still got dignity,
still just me,
Burning moments in time,
with eternity the prize,
And synchronicity,
still speaks to me,
So I'm biding my time,
alone with my crimes,
Of lethargy,
no self belief,
and loving thee.
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huwbeauty
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2011-06-10 06:56:47]
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Re: Still missing you.
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 10th June 2011 @ 08:28:18 AM AEST
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Hi Mat
This is anguished poetry indeed. Whatever the subject, you have the skill and ability to draw the reader in. I am drawn right into the very heart of your anguish, brilliantly expressed, and will read this several times. Well done my friend. |
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Re: Still missing you.
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by Tomboy on
Friday, 10th June 2011 @ 12:36:29 PM AEST
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| Very nicely expressed and difficult to do. Please watch spellings of "you're" and "denial." |
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Re: Still missing you.
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by northernlights on
Friday, 10th June 2011 @ 12:36:29 PM AEST
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| And cause everything I see reminds me of thee......the pivotal line, the root of the anguish and the centre of the storm that never stops spinning the world with every part of you crying stop,great writing comes from the heart at a price and this pays it x |
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