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Mind's Eye
Contributed by
northernlights
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Tuesday, 7th June 2011 @ 02:00:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Soft the voice that calms my soul and brings
Soothing in harmony of sound and tranquil
Pondering, to bring the curtain of flesh down
On the physical.
To illuminate the stage for the spiritual, and
I find there
I am walking,
Through and through
the centre of my eye.
Hungry, in dilation my pupil, like
a ravenous creature breathes, with each and
Every breath an increasing darkness
Engulfing,
Till global in size.
I am swallowed,
Suspended.
Staring into the black hole,
My captor!
Blood through optical capilliaries
Rushes over me
Pulsating in waves,
And it is through this very portal I am transformed!
I am the strength in the pounding of dragons
Wing, as it
Beats a path to face me
Then vanishes!
I am doves’ full flight in purest
Image. A moment of purity
Swallowed into obscurity.
I am comforted by
Oscillating movements of humming birds
Wings, bringing cooling
And refreshing breeze
To my face.
And I am lifted up
To honey comb skies,
Where I am consumed!
I am the image of my mind’s eye!
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2011-06-07 02:00:57]
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Re: Mind's Eye
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th June 2011 @ 02:10:12 AM AEST
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Great writing, friend.
Blessings,
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Re: Mind's Eye
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 7th June 2011 @ 05:09:29 AM AEST
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| Oh Anna, to have your mind's eye!! What a great piece of writing, calm, soothing and highly descriptive all in one. Thanks for sharing these wonderful images seen through your mind's eye. |
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Re: Mind's Eye
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by spud on
Thursday, 9th June 2011 @ 07:07:11 AM AEST
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Hi Anna,
It appears that my comments page is now considered 'anonymous' - must have to go
through all that joining process again.
Anyway, I digress ........
Wonderful descriptions here as always.
The mind's eye is a wonderful panorama
on life.
Tommy
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Re: Mind's Eye
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 9th June 2011 @ 09:18:20 AM AEST
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very beautiful work you pen,
most vivid and artistic and yet
most compelling in it's reality . . .
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Re: Mind's Eye
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by huwbeauty on
Friday, 10th June 2011 @ 07:12:42 AM AEST
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Wonderful imagery Anna. Yet another really well written poem from you.
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Re: Mind's Eye
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 10th June 2011 @ 02:32:34 PM AEST
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The imagery you have used in this is stunning and so imaginative.
I read it twice in case I'd missed anything the first time, I was so bombarded with images created by the words.
You certainly have a unique and captivating style.
Steve |
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