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pity... or repect you? pt.1
Contributed by
gypsymaddness
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Sunday, 5th June 2011 @ 02:36:09 PM in AEST
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I feel so...mutilated, have to cry, wanna hit anything and wanna die. I feel so...manipulated, i have to laugh, who am i kiddin'? I never seem to get right the freakin' facts. I feel so stupid for thinking you'll change, I'm your entertainment, im always dissapointed and im always too late
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Re: pity... or repect you? pt.1
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by poeticjestix on
Sunday, 5th June 2011 @ 02:44:11 PM AEST
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| part 2 would suggest you are a mug. Maybe the use of part 1 was intelligence on your part. if so, bravo. for I am as thick as 2 short planks but saw that coming |
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Re: pity... or repect you? pt.1
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by Tomboy on
Sunday, 5th June 2011 @ 08:39:40 PM AEST
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| Good juxtaposition of the words "mutiliated" and "manipulated." Looking forward to reading Part Two. |
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