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war bones
Contributed by
elle
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Tuesday, 31st May 2011 @ 07:11:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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irreverent calm
suddenly, undeniably
heart-wrenchingly. . . still
still. . .
still. . .
blissfully still. . .
coincide with sunset
take comfort
take all. . .
the time. . .
in the world. . .
ascetic now
& for all time
precious
exertion
& false beguile
take refuge now
innocuous child. . .
evening frowns
a soft voice
calls you home. . .
Copyright ©
elle
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2011-05-31 19:11:19]
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Re: war bones
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 31st May 2011 @ 11:24:37 PM AEST
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| i like all the emotion you put behind this one. well done. |
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Re: war bones
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by Banjosandwitch on
Wednesday, 1st June 2011 @ 02:59:25 AM AEST
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| emotive emoticons emotional =extacy |
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Re: war bones
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 1st June 2011 @ 09:53:20 AM AEST
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The style in which you wrote this made even more emotion pour in each verse. Nice work.
Michelle |
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Re: war bones
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by Tomboy on
Wednesday, 1st June 2011 @ 12:57:56 PM AEST
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| Very interesting structure, an exciting read! |
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Re: war bones
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by Natkingcole on
Wednesday, 1st June 2011 @ 02:02:58 PM AEST
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| Great poem i love the structure and how you capture the emotion |
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Re: war bones
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by Spike on
Sunday, 12th June 2011 @ 10:17:46 PM AEST
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soft pauses, held moments, all the time, now that time doesn't matter. Your insight and poetry still enthral.
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Re: war bones
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by ming on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 09:22:18 AM AEST
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Hello lovey,
So glad to see an awesome poem of yours. Missed you. Your words still move me as no others can. Thanks for that...
ming |
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