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Eyes
Contributed by
raymondsincere
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Tuesday, 31st May 2011 @ 07:08:51 PM in AEST
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Eyes
Has anybody ever told you eyes tell the truth even when tongues lie because throats can
be an open tomb speaking death but eyes are the window to the soul.
Cant you see that eyes talk and start attraction ,there the reason that lust turns to love and
the start of heated passion.
Honestly don't you like fighting the feeling when eyes have captured you, hypnotized your
emotions, captivating your entire being.
Don't you think that eyes name should be magnetism because they draw you close and leaves
you wondering at the same time what a person wants, thinks, and feels about you the most.
Let me tell you this, if you don't know eyes will give away your mind and heart, they can't
they can't deceive there job is to affect, be affectionate,appealing,cause attractions and activates feelings,
You have to know that eyes are like drugs or the drug dealer,have you sprung and really addicted.
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Re: Eyes
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by Tomboy on
Wednesday, 1st June 2011 @ 01:14:58 PM AEST
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Seems incomplete (I don't see the relevance of the final line to the rest of the poem which is, on the whole, quite good.)
Also please differentiate between "there," "their" and "they're." Nice read! |
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Re: Eyes
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by RachelSixx on
Wednesday, 1st June 2011 @ 02:21:33 PM AEST
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| i really like the whole idea of this, great job! |
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Re: Eyes
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by MyPoetic_Life on
Thursday, 22nd December 2011 @ 12:25:03 AM AEST
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| Wow Great poem. I really like this and 100% agree |
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