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Isabelle's Linens
Contributed by
elle
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Tuesday, 31st May 2011 @ 05:34:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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Isabelle's linens
draped coyly
about
what breeze could render
hither to. . .
venturing forth
to instill
such subtle flutterings
in shades of sunlight
streaming. . .
changing hue
& I
decasualizing
wrapped up in you
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2011-05-31 17:34:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Isabelle's Linens
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Tuesday, 31st May 2011 @ 07:01:44 PM AEST (User
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beautiful writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Isabelle's Linens
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tomboy on
Wednesday, 1st June 2011 @ 01:20:19 PM AEST (User
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Fascinating structure and presentation of the imagery. I am enthralled with that word "decasualizing." Great read, five stars!! |
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Re: Isabelle's Linens
(User Rating: 1 ) by Natkingcole on
Wednesday, 1st June 2011 @ 02:23:37 PM AEST (User
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I like this poem, it's mysterious |
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Re: Isabelle's Linens
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 09:26:04 AM AEST (User
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I sit here in awe! The structure of this poem had me adrift in the smells and sounds of laundry aflutter on the line and soft-love wrapped in emotion!
ming |
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