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waiting to run away from tomorrow
Contributed by
frozensuicide
on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Letting go of the hold,
Sitting here shivering in the cold.
Under the pouring rain,
I look around feeling the torturing pain.
Sleeks of ice splinting my eyes,
Sprays of gushing snow burning my thighs,
Sitting here in this life,
Gone tomorrow, feeling the strife.
I shed a tear of sorrow,
Wanting to run away from tomorrow,
Where nothing is alright,
Where nothing is right.
Drive me straight off the edge,
Just don’t look down the ledge,
Burning embers to rule out the sorrow,
Waiting to run away from tomorrow.
Foolish dreams-illusions.
Never breaking from the allusions.
Brink of my own insanity,
Stuck outside in this vanity.
Kept to myself,
Unable to see yourself,
Stuck in this retribution,
Stuck in my own confusion.
Help me-set me free.
Guide me along my path to be,
My star-my shining hope,
Lend me your power to cope.
Sacrifice the love for sorrow,
Waiting to run away from tomorrow,
Gently stroking the sorrow,
Where I rest till tomorrow.
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Re: waiting to run away from tomorrow
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by lilch4ever on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 02:54:36 PM AEST
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| That was really good and very insightful. Love the rhyming. Wonderful piece of writing. Lovely write keep up the good work. |
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Re: waiting to run away from tomorrow
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 09:14:19 PM AEST
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This was amazing Lelu seriously. It spoke to me alot
I shed a tear of sorrow,
Wanting to run away from tomorrow,
Those two lines say alot how I feel. This was a gem. Your poems are so amazing and speak volumes to me. Thnx for sharing this. It was beautiful in its sadness.
Your friend,
Joel |
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