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By the sea..........
Contributed by
Lamorna
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Tuesday, 31st May 2011 @ 04:03:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Beside the sea i wish , wish all the places i could be, all the places you could take me within your blues our dues are holdin us but i trust,beside the sea your wishin this same wish too, being there and stare at us two before the waves of life take us back……..
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Re: By the sea..........
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 31st May 2011 @ 07:15:15 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Really good write. It takes me back the late 80's.
some of the top days in my life.
I luv your writing.
Blessings,
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Re: By the sea..........
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by Tomboy on
Wednesday, 1st June 2011 @ 01:23:52 PM AEST
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| I didn't think I would like this poem when I first saw the way you laid it out, but I have to admit it is great and simulates all the fury of the sea. Great read! |
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Re: By the sea..........
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by Natkingcole on
Wednesday, 1st June 2011 @ 02:06:55 PM AEST
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| Nice poem, strange spelling |
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