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Gone
Contributed by
DarylLew151
on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 07:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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No One Was Ever There
And No One Ever Will Be
No One Ever Did Care
An No One Will Ever See
Copyright ©
DarylLew151
... [
2003-04-28 07:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fwog on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 07:51:37 AM AEST (User
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Hi,
These four lines are so beautiful and sad.
I enjoyed your structure, but to the 3rd line.
We have just met, check my poem "I Care"
Lots of people do,
Ciao
Fwog |
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