|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Disappeared
Contributed by
Ringo
on
Thursday, 19th May 2011 @ 01:48:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
The end of the day
I don't want to see you
The motion of the waves slow the ryhme
As you call me I hear that
She's hungry for emotion taker of hearts
Love from the world
I can't stop her she viciously inhales my love
I'm not enough for my downfall
Trying to save myself
Queitly plot my escape
Seeing her clear skull
In plain sight
Entraced fool cannot hold off the river
Blow up the dam take the key
Atop of me just stop
Drowning me in sorrow
I want to be the only one
All I get is the numbness after you leave
Back to him with my love and leaves
Copyright ©
Ringo
... [
2011-05-19 13:48:51]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Disappeared
(User Rating: 1 )
by JohnnyFallen on
Friday, 20th May 2011 @ 01:19:03 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I can say it's well-written but a little complex for me. That means you can probably write a poem better than I can. x] Good job. |
|
|
Re: Disappeared
(User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on
Monday, 23rd May 2011 @ 11:41:03 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is obviously from the heart and real experience 4 sure!! Very courageous of you to get so deep with you feelings and words too!! I admire anyone that trusts enough in their work and themselves to put it all out there with no fear of what anyone will say or think!!
Keep Writing and sharing always!!
Hugz,
Dana |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
