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That Night
Contributed by
Butterflyperfect
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Wednesday, 18th May 2011 @ 05:18:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The dark corridors of my mind
Hold many of my darkest fears
You shall never be aware
Of the fears that are there
Think of them as my secrets
Something never will I share
My secrets and mine alone
My past for which I must atone
The blood and the smell
The memory so clear
Of all the pain I endured
And could not be cured
They stand as a reminder
Of who I once was
Who I never again will be
If it is really up to me
What must I do to heal
To find a peace in myself
Where must I confide
Instead of wanting suicide
I know its not the cure
But the darkness is currupting sanity
My vision remains blurred
And my feelings are stirred
I'm sorry for my actions
That day I lost you
It was the hardest pain ever to feel
And I wanted it to not be real
I wished inside myself
That it was just a dream
Then I would wake up to you
But I know thats far from the truth
I lost you and I'm at fault
Now I must pay the cost
My darkest fear has come to life
Forcing me to feel the strife
I messed up
And I am in the wrong
Who am I to complain
When I am the one who is to blame
So here I hide the secrets of that night
Down the corridors in my mind and far from sight
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Butterflyperfect
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2011-05-18 17:18:49]
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Re: That Night
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by emystar on
Thursday, 19th May 2011 @ 05:19:56 PM AEST
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Sad but well written.
We all mess up but we can't let a mistake bring us down. Some day you will understand why.
I've been where you are more than once. Feel what you feel, ditch the bad memories only to learn from.
This piece of life will eventually make you realize Lifes not over because of a mistake.
You need, right now, to find forgiveness to yourself.
Once you've reached that point life will flow more freely,
If you need to rattle just pm me I'm usually around here some where.
God luvs u, blessings, huggs, prayer,
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Re: That Night
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by JohnnyFallen on
Friday, 20th May 2011 @ 01:23:25 PM AEST
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| That sounds like lost love but it also has a small hint of darkness in it as well. We all know what it feels like to feel like we have our face in the dirt and it hurts. I hope you feel better and you did a good job writing that poem. |
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