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Mercy
Contributed by
MattHolcombe
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Tuesday, 17th May 2011 @ 05:52:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Solidarity was her name,
Her touch as gentle as the breeze,
While she trapped me with her siren song,
I was always at her mercy.
But she always came back,
When she put me on my knees,
For she knew my weakness,
I was always at her mercy.
A smile as cold as the depths,
But her lips warmed and filled mine,
This is how she kept me,
I was always at her mercy.
What has happened to me?
I thought she was one of a kind
So how do I love another?
I will always beg for mercy.
Copyright ©
MattHolcombe
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2011-05-17 17:52:09]
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Re: Mercy
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by Butterflyperfect on
Wednesday, 18th May 2011 @ 05:37:40 PM AEST
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You conveyed the power of love well here. Bravo. I like this.
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Re: Mercy
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by Butterflyperfect on
Wednesday, 18th May 2011 @ 05:37:42 PM AEST
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You conveyed the power of love well here. Bravo. I like this.
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Re: Mercy
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by Butterflyperfect on
Wednesday, 18th May 2011 @ 05:39:44 PM AEST
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You conveyed the power of love well here. Bravo. I like this.
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Re: Mercy
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by Voice of the Silent on
Wednesday, 18th May 2011 @ 09:36:36 PM AEST
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Great writing it's the first thing I read tonight,
was a good thing I picked this one I liked the repetition at the end of each stanza
hope to read more soon
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Re: Mercy
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 1st June 2011 @ 10:11:09 AM AEST
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Loved this verse, vivid in detail. Nicely done.
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