|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Lightening Snake
Contributed by
cashfan1
on
Monday, 16th May 2011 @ 02:27:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
|
Like a giant snake tripping
The lightening gyrates to the music of thunder.
With the tongue of a serpent
It devours mountain's and horizon
And caught by the first fat blobs of cold rain
It let's forth an angry hiss
Searing black clouds that trail a plume of smoke.
Like a kite caught in the ecstacy of a wild wind
It thrashes and twists in a field of endless sky.
Singed and steaming the sky trembles,
The rain stops, the horizon reforms
And the mountain's rise up again,
Bruised and battered by the violence.
Copyright ©
cashfan1
... [
2011-05-16 02:27:28]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Lightening Snake
(User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on
Monday, 16th May 2011 @ 05:43:07 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| nature can bite you in the ass |
|
|
Re: Lightening Snake
(User Rating: 1 )
by spud on
Saturday, 11th June 2011 @ 05:10:21 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
WOW, Dennis!!
If I had the gift to paint I would be reading
this poem and sweeping my brush across the canvas in long violent strokes of Nature's terrible wrath.
Frighteningly descriptive!
Tommy
|
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
