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blood soaked killer
Contributed by
poeticsnowman
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Sunday, 15th May 2011 @ 09:54:44 PM in AEST
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that blood soaked killer is now in sight. that blood soaked killer is quite the fright. he"ll slash your throat and cut your wrist. there is no point to raise a fist. he'll beat you down and chop you up. its not for glory but is for lust. he'll carve his name into your flesh. i dont think you want to know the rest. his snake like tounge licks the nife. the one he used to kill the night. he looks in a mirror suprised to see. that blood stained killer was always me. the thing i killed was my soul. all this depression never gets old. i welcome eptyness as a long lost friend. i wallow in darkness so lets begin.my heart beats slow as my mind bends. that blood stoaked killer is my friend. inside of me he will sit and wait. forgotten in darkness that is my fate. the light dies down and darkness creeps in. as i said before lets begin. so kill your smile and wipe your tears. there is nothing that he fears. i didnt always think this way. believe it or not i used to pray. no matter how much i would pray and cry. not a single answer came from the sky. i always looked up hoping to be found. then i would see a puddle on the ground. puddle of tears that came from me. that blood soaked killer set me free. although he'll never kill a thing. my body and soul he'll rearrange. maybe i just think too much. maybe i should just wake up...
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Re: blood soaked killer
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by InfinitePoet on
Monday, 23rd May 2011 @ 11:46:36 AM AEST
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this is sikk and also well written in the sense that it explains itself hella clearly!!! I really dig it
It also has the flow of a death metal song 4 real!!! Your artistry is recognized and appreciated by me know this!!
Keep sharing and writing always,
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Re: blood soaked killer
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 1st June 2011 @ 10:13:24 AM AEST
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ooooooooo gave me the chills.
I say this often, I like it better and think it reads better in stanza's. Other than that this is powerful and hella spooky! Blood born honest!
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Re: blood soaked killer
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd October 2011 @ 05:38:43 AM AEST
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| beautiful! i really liked it! i'm into things like this. i bet this would make an excellent movie! excellent! you have talent! |
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Re: blood soaked killer
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by KROLLER on
Tuesday, 4th October 2011 @ 10:25:16 PM AEST
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| wow!! this is amazing. i love to watch serial killer movies. you should try to become a producer, or someone involved with making movies. not only can you write, but this is movie material. |
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