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Pictures Remain
Contributed by
The_unknown
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Saturday, 14th May 2011 @ 12:56:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Looking back at old photographs
I can recall the moment
I can sense the second hanging in the air
If even just a glimpse
And I can remember the moment we decided to
Combine all of our pictures together
A collection of our memories
A set for each of us to keep
And it was our final goodbye
"Our friendship is over...
but keep our memories forever,
Because we had some good times,"
Now we barely glance at each other
And I think the only time you look me in the eye
Is when I look at your photograph
Copyright ©
The_unknown
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2011-05-14 12:56:33]
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Re: Pictures Remain
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by JohnnyFallen on
Saturday, 14th May 2011 @ 04:42:56 PM AEST
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| Nicely written. The poem makes me want to reflect back on my past relationships and realize how much I miss them. Keep up the writing and who knows, it might get you somewhere. |
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Re: Pictures Remain
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by lonelyguy92 on
Saturday, 14th May 2011 @ 05:56:34 PM AEST
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| Very nice poem =) |
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Re: Pictures Remain
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 17th May 2011 @ 02:34:13 AM AEST
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| I found this very painful esp the last two lines,as though you are stirring the ashes of a fire that;s gone out,feel mournful,great connective writing. |
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