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This swirling mind.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Saturday, 14th May 2011 @ 09:36:31 AM in AEST
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Swirling mind that's so unkind,
will not give me words,
Smiling blind, still sublime,
defies despite the hurts,
I'm complicit in this tangle,
And wrangle with all I've heard,
I try to find an angle,
with intrinsic razor sherds.
But thoughts course,
then assemble,
And organize in herds,
Yet all to soon, they will scramble,
like a flock of startled birds.
Well I'll still battle, not rattled,
through the seemingly absurd,
This swirling mind,
that seems unkind,
will one day,
give me words.
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Re: This swirling mind.
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 14th May 2011 @ 11:09:21 AM AEST
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| Bravo!! Well done Mat, another fine piece flows from your pen. I always look forward to poems by you and you never disappoint. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: This swirling mind.
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by Natkingcole on
Monday, 16th May 2011 @ 10:23:26 AM AEST
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| Nice poem and good ideas |
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Re: This swirling mind.
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 17th May 2011 @ 02:37:48 AM AEST
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| Great imagery Mat,could hardly contain the words on the page for them wanting to cause chaos! |
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