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Shadow
Contributed by
desciple
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Friday, 13th May 2011 @ 06:49:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Relentless shadow of mine.
Witness to my pain and affliction.
Holder to many of my secrets.
You were there when I needed someone the most,
And life didn't give me much hope.
Follower of my footsteps,
Disciple of the night,
Minister of the dark
Deceiver of the light...
Flowing slow with my every motion.
While you mimic my every single notion.
Hopeless...
Hanging on by a thread.
My Enemy, My Shadow...
My Friend.
Copyright ©
desciple
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2011-05-13 18:49:34]
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Re: Shadow
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by deusdeira on
Saturday, 14th May 2011 @ 03:12:58 AM AEST
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noice!
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Re: Shadow
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by JohnnyFallen on
Saturday, 14th May 2011 @ 04:51:30 PM AEST
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| That's how I feel about my shadow too sometimes. I love it. Nice piece of writing, keep up the good work. You are talented. |
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Re: Shadow
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by petulinka on
Thursday, 19th May 2011 @ 06:07:34 PM AEST
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| like this one as well!!!it has a good sense of rhymes, it goes just naturally!!nice work! |
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